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by BlueTribalRose

schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ha. Thats awesome. I love it when they use magic to "get to know each other better" and pleaase each other.
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the cuteness wkth the passion and the use of magic for kink and truth.
person lilyj
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely quote granny grammar.
Did you ever get the chance to re-read your fic?
Verbs thrown away like this give headache, and make people say 'I don't wanna read this anymore'
person Teresa
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. lol. the end was TOTAL fluff! lol. but the rest of the story was really good i thought. cant wait to read ur other story
person granny grammar
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Granny Grammar thinks you should get a beta who will stop you from switching verb tenses- find anyone who passed fourth grade grammar and they\'ll do it for you.
person Cory
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow....yeah that about sums it up....that was bloody amazing