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for Two Step

by Hawklaw

schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the way their relationship progressed in your story. Very believable.
person Sparky
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow loved it lol, will there be more?
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person Stephanie
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The fic is actually well written and intriguing, which is hard to find. I hope to read more from you.
person celticdewin
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that this story is very well written and I must confess that I love the pairing. I hope you continue this story. I would love to see how everyone else reacts!
person patricia
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very well written. do you know waht the best part of this fic is? the fact that the story would have ended beautifully even without the love-making scene...i.e. the story could be just as effective for younger readers. fantastic job!
person funky_faerie87
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. It ret read it all and I\'m really hoping you\'re not gonna stop there?! That was an incredibly hot fourth chapter and the using humour at the end was a great touch. Please let me know when you update this story. Keep up the great writing!!
person deblovesdragon
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hawklaw, I love this story. I love it when people come up new and interesting pairings.
I look forward to more.
How is Hermione feeling about Bill. Obviously she wasn\'t upset that he slept in her bed.
The twins were funny in chapter 1. I just love them.
person Lyndie578
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, these chapters are really great. I\'ve never really considered HG/BW before, maybe HG/CW. I hope you continue the story, as I look forward to reading more of your work.