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for Room of Eternal Lust

by JohnnyCrow

person BadWebDiver
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YesYesYess!!!! I always wanted to see Harry and Creevey finally get together, and this was perfect.
person Flavia
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I\'m not usually one to flame, but this is a piece of crap, in every sense of the word. I\'ve shat better writing than this. Are you still learning english sweetheart? Because you almost fooled me into thinking you could read. Congrats. If you need help, get a beta! Honestly, leave the writing to the writers. If you can\'t write, content yourself with reading! Not to say that I am a writer, I would not presume so much, but this is terrible erotica. I expect better next time, if there is such a thing.
person eric2
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was good. very good infact if it was your first fic. you must keep writing.