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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woo! that was awesome! keep writing it, great idea!
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Your writing style adds to much to this cliched storyline - it makes it a whole lot funnier than most body switch stories. I loved how you had Draco struggling with wearing a bra - perhaps he\'ll get smarter and transfigure them to open from the front. Boys co-ordinating with women\'s clothing is funnier - men\'s clothes are so much more straightforward.
I love the premise of your body-switch though - and McGonagall having had to undergo it before; that\'s hilarious! It also occured to me that Percy Weasley and Penelope Clearwater would have gone through this too; likewise James Potter and Lily Evans. Perhaps that\'s part of the reason why they ended up together? Perhaps Hermione could research and find out that the incidence of Head Pupils becoming a couple is almost 80% of the time? *winks*
What else to add? I feel that Draco\'s \'rambling thought\' - whether by intention or not - is a good idea; it sounds female enough for him to begin rambling, if he has a sudden increase in female hormones. Perhaps he\'ll be more \'feeling\' during this time. As for Hermione, her \'rambling\uld uld be a force of habit, but tempered much by her male hormones. In fact, Hermione seemed to spend less time exploring her new body than Draco - then again, that\'s partly because Draco\'s a *boy*. heh.
I gave a rec of this story on the dracohermionecommunity Yahoogroup, and I look forward to updates for this story.
I love the premise of your body-switch though - and McGonagall having had to undergo it before; that\'s hilarious! It also occured to me that Percy Weasley and Penelope Clearwater would have gone through this too; likewise James Potter and Lily Evans. Perhaps that\'s part of the reason why they ended up together? Perhaps Hermione could research and find out that the incidence of Head Pupils becoming a couple is almost 80% of the time? *winks*
What else to add? I feel that Draco\'s \'rambling thought\' - whether by intention or not - is a good idea; it sounds female enough for him to begin rambling, if he has a sudden increase in female hormones. Perhaps he\'ll be more \'feeling\' during this time. As for Hermione, her \'rambling\uld uld be a force of habit, but tempered much by her male hormones. In fact, Hermione seemed to spend less time exploring her new body than Draco - then again, that\'s partly because Draco\'s a *boy*. heh.
I gave a rec of this story on the dracohermionecommunity Yahoogroup, and I look forward to updates for this story.
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You EVIL, EVIL person! You can\'t leave us hanging here! I want to see some more of this story! *BWEG*
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it will be a very interesting story! Please update often!
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe! I love it! I\'ve read body-switch fics before, but this is off to the best start of any of them. Please update soon!
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was absolutely hilarious
i don\'t know what part of it made me laugh
but it was certainly hilarious
i hope you write more soon and post a new chapter up
~ Creepy Susie
i don\'t know what part of it made me laugh
but it was certainly hilarious
i hope you write more soon and post a new chapter up
~ Creepy Susie
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Snickers* Brilliant and extremely funny! Hell, just the title alone was enough for me. Can\'t wait to read your next chapter.
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this fic.
I can\'t wait to find out whatpenspens next.
I can just imagine how much fun draco is gonna have in hermione\'s body.
Hahahahahahahahahahahhahaaha.
Please hurry and write another chapter.
Cyndi
I can\'t wait to find out whatpenspens next.
I can just imagine how much fun draco is gonna have in hermione\'s body.
Hahahahahahahahahahahhahaaha.
Please hurry and write another chapter.
Cyndi
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March 21, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Keep Going!The story is SO good!