rate_review Reviews

Think it\'s a good story so far, but could do with a better title (gives too much away) and much less of the self-congratulatory \"email\" and A/N babbling accompanying the beginning and ending of every single chapter. You might think that\'s really funny, but it\'s one of those things that annoy readers as it does nothing to advance the plot. Since these two are in each other\'s bodies, I\'d also like to see them come to a better understanding of one another in the later chapters. You\'ve begun to do this with the \"Black Mark\" situation and it\'ll be interesting to see exactly how Hermione will help Draco with his problem. Thank you for avoiding the more obvious sexual pratfalls of gender swapping! Oh ... and Draco ... vampiric spawn who\'s sickened by the sight of blood??? OMG! I loooooved it! That was funny!

Interesting twist including the Dark Mark! And the Ginny scene was hilarious, and so true...Another awesome chapter by a brilliant author! Can\'t wait to see what happens, so don\'t delay...KEEP WRITING!!

Also, *I* don\'t mind the A/N you put at the beginning of the chapters! It ensures me that you read my review, and your responses are hilarious, too! People can take 2 seconds of their time to scroll down to the story if they\'re not interested in reading what you\'ve got to say. Anywho, where was I...? Oh yeah, WRITE!

Woman!!!!! please post more i am dying here!!!! it was getting so good then......nothing!I loI loved the whole tampon thing!! it was the awesom!! now if only he got killler cramps that would have been great!! a lil pay back! any im lovin it so hurry and type some more up!

I\'ve honestly never been so disappointed that a chapter ended before. I want...no need more! I can\'t wait until tomorrow. Poor Ginny, at least she got some advice and didn\'t inflate Draco\'s head too much. ;) And I\'m curious to see where this whole \"Dark Mark\" thing is going. Gah! *dies of anticpation and curiousity* XD

LOL! I LOVE this fic. Draco was surprisingly good at girl talk. Great line...\"walking, talking orgasm\". Keep up the great work.

I\'m baaaaack.....sorry, I\'ve been a little busy these last couple of days with work and all, but I just wanted to tell you that you\'re doing a lovely job, especially with this last chapter. I\'m really glad you brought Draco\'s actual troubles into this instead of just larking about on the fun stuff. Don\'t get me wrong, I *love* the fun stuff, but addressing the issue of the Dark Mark gives this story a depth it has hitherto been lacking. Oh, and I\'m not sure if it was this chapter or the last, but it\'s spelled \"lapse\" not \"laps\" and I\'m not really sure that Hermione could have refrained from peeing until her second night in Draco\'s body.

-jo

ps: See, I t bei being nice this time! I hope you don\'t make me go back to being mean....

I really like this story. It is interesting what you are putting the characters through. I sincerely look forward to more chapters. Also, if ya ever need a beta, I can do so pretty decently.

*squeek* Ahh! I laughed and thoroughly enjoyed what you have up so far! So mean to make a guy have a period, mean but just... It\'s awesome so far, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Hehehe... Cheshire cat grinning again. :-) I liked this chapter. I think (and since this seems to be a D/Hr fic, you mioght be doing the same) that you should have Hermione and Draco \'get together\' for show to get everyone off their back. Hehehehe.... that\'d be fun! Well, can\'t wait til tomorrow!