schedule
July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Poor Ron! And the manly ritual public peeing scene cracked me up. I\'m glad you kept your replies and ramblings. :) I\'m stoked for the next longer chapters. I\'m always so disappointed when the chapter\'s over. Keep up the good work!
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiiiiiii!
Toldja I\'d be over here to check this out. I\'m eagerly awaiting the nastiness in day 6....-evil smirk- Wahoo!
Toldja I\'d be over here to check this out. I\'m eagerly awaiting the nastiness in day 6....-evil smirk- Wahoo!
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow! This just keeps getting better.
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, which I thoroughly enjoyed. Oh, and I wanted to mention that I do not mind (like someone else said) the author\'s notes and stuff. I always find it interesting to get to know the author a little bit as I read their story. It actually makes the whole experience very enoyable and more personal. It makes teh reader appreciate the story just a little bit more. Anyways, I just wanted to mention that. Back to my review of your story:
I thought it was really good, I wish it had been longer, but you take what you can get. Heh, and I like the way you left Hermione and Draco in a very sexual position. Just great! I can\'t wait for more. You\'re doing a wonderful job, please keep it up!
I thought it was really good, I wish it had been longer, but you take what you can get. Heh, and I like the way you left Hermione and Draco in a very sexual position. Just great! I can\'t wait for more. You\'re doing a wonderful job, please keep it up!
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are writing quite fast. I can barely keep up!
Great last couple of chapters. I love how Hermione gets her first real taste of sexuality in Malfoy\'s body. Draco is learning some new respect for women and they both are figureing out how to get along with each other.
I am patiently - or maybe impatiently - waiting for the snogging and smut. Although I must say the wanking and massaging was tittilating.
Great last couple of chapters. I love how Hermione gets her first real taste of sexuality in Malfoy\'s body. Draco is learning some new respect for women and they both are figureing out how to get along with each other.
I am patiently - or maybe impatiently - waiting for the snogging and smut. Although I must say the wanking and massaging was tittilating.
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, this is the pleasant treat I get for waiting a few days before checking to see if you have updated. Many delicious chapters to enjoy. I enjoyed Hermione\'s view of masturbating, was rather amusing. Harry and Luna? Ginny and Deanhat hat made me cringe, but, they aren\'t the real part of the story, now are they? I have to admit, I\'m curious to Ron and what he\'s been up to since you haven\'t really mentioned him. Lavender being disappointed after \'Hermione\' straightened things out, very funny. Looking forward to your future chapters.
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That massage scene was quite inspiring isn it? I like the idea... boys have to lean that girls live is not that easy! LOL Please please, continue it!
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start for the chapter. A hard on in the morning...great idea! Wonder what Malfoy would do if he found out about what she goes through in his body?....He seems so open about sharing all his experiences in Hermoine\'s body with her...but she doesn\'t seem to open about sharing her experiences in his body with him, wonder why that is?...Well I\'m glad that you made malfoy a relatively good guy, but I hope that you won\'t turn him entirely soft...take all the fun out. You\'re very creative in your ideas. Keep up the good work!
Aileen
Aileen
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Read it here in the first place, less complicated lol ;)
That chapter was really good! Keep going!
That chapter was really good! Keep going!
schedule
July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s just getting better and better. i\'m still amazed that your english is flawless! your writing ability and your creativity are making this story something i look forward to reading on a daily basis :)