rate_review Reviews

I\'m a big fan. I kept giggling all throughout the story - great plot and lovable characters. Keep up with the very fine work!

\"Sanitary towels\" is correct but a bit old fashioned. \"Pads\" works. I doubt many 16 year olds actually use them though.

HOTTNESS!!!!!! i love it so far. hurry up w. the next chapter!!! so do they get together really soon? is there any other \"bordering on NC-17 chapters ahead *wibnk wink*??????? i hope so!!!!!

-raven

So I see that you\'ve essentially ended act 1, for which I\'m actually relieved. It means there\'s going to be more of this romp. You\'ve created a very nice \'banter\' between Draco and Hermione, and even with the underlying seriousness, you\'ve still drawn in the teenaged awkwardness beautifully. I\'m eager for Acto 2.

I\'m reviewing again to lend my support for your amazing update schedule and story.

Girl talk with Draco & Ginny made me snort with laughter. Especially when Ginny asks \"Hermione\" about her knowledge.

And the plotline with Draco not wanting to take the mark...nice. So this means you\'re going to continue writing after the first week is done? (Yay for non-rushed ending!)

Plus I think you kept Hermione in character when she \"examines\" and \"analyzes\" her morning activity. It\'s not so much about sex, but a new experience and learning.

And I like Draco\'s whining about back pains and wanting a back massage. Also that line about how women seemed to be cursed with everything bad...Lordy did he ever get it correct. =P

I do have a small grammar issue with the day six chapter - you can double check this later, but if the objects are countable (non-liquid essentially) the correct word is \"fewer followers Voldemort has...\" instead of \"lesser.\" I just hate to see everything else handled beautifully and have it stained by this small error!

Anyway I can\'t wait for the next set of updates. :D

i really like your story and it\'s one of the funniest things i\'ve ever read. I especially liked the parts where Draco plays with Hermione\'s breasts, it\'s a little disturbing but sounds like something all guys would probably enjoy. And the chapter where Draco gets his period, i was crying cuz i was laughing so hard. anyways! i love your story and can\'t wait to read more of it!

Yay! love the story and the random ramblings ^_^ wooo yay! update! yay! ^_^ ok stopping now... great sory by the way ^_^ and i do like that peeing scene in the loo, that was funny ^_^ will mione tell harry and ron that she switched bodies later? it\'d be soo funy to see their reactions! aha wha what with the kissing thingy with harry and Ron asking draco out ^_^ ahahahaha! ....and mione seeing their \'equipment\' too,embaembarassing! still its tru tho...us girls get stuck with all the pains, lucky bastards!

i\'m back! I\'m submitting here cause i don\'t feel like going back to ffnet asnd cause they will only let you review once a chapter, don\'t worry it won\'t be as long, I hope. ah yes I was right about the erection thing, I also thought you might go more indept with Harry Luna thing, but i was wrong. well anyways was it only that chapter that was diferent on aff, i\'m guessing so cause you would have told us if it wasn\'t, wouldn\'t you?
well anyways, enjoy iceland if you don\'t update before then, which i hope you do, cause now i\'m hooked
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This is such a neat story. I\'m glad that you update everyday, otherwise I don\'t think that I could stand it. I think you\'re a very good writer. Keep up the good work.

Wow, thats such a good ideia!!! I loved the part where Draco had to deal with \"womanly issues\"! LOL! Well Ill be waiting for a review!

-Toodles