AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Why Draco Should Not Be Using Tampons

by Padfoot

person moony_reader
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Padfoot, all I can say is \"Wow!\" That was an amazing sex scene. Good job! But now I\'m wondering, \"Where does this go from here?\" Is it the traditional secret love-fest until Harry finds out and then Ron feels betrayed and Draco\'s life is endangered because of his Muggle-born secret lover, etc? Or could I recommend that you do some more body-switching (because those chapters are absolutely HILARIOUS)?

Hmm... maybe Ron finds about about D and H and becomes so unbearable that Hermione is miserable. And maybe Pansy finds out about H and D and threatens to expose them. And maybe, in the tradition of killing two birds with one stone, Hermione and Draco get Ron and Pansy to do a body-switch, thus causing Ron to better relate to Hermione\'s predicament and incapacitating Pansy so that she can\'t tell on them... after all, what self-respecting Slytheriath ath Eater would believe \"Weasley\'s\" crazy, body-switching story? Hmm... what do you think? Too over the top? Well, no matter, I love your writing, anyways no matter where you go with this plot. p itp it up, Padfoot!
person Ning
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How about I ask you to marry me?
This turned out to be fucking fantastic!
And Donnie Darko and Mulan? AMAZING! My two favorite movies! (hehe.)
This is so excellent -- I can\'t wait for the conclusion but I don\'t want it to end!
Good job!
[Ning]
person Eris13
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God...You can\'t write more chapters?!!!! I\'ve been out for the 4th of July weekend, and when I came back, I couldn\'t get into the site...FINALLY I come back to a brilliant story that keeps getting better, and you\'re stating that ynly nly have one more chapter to go?! Are you insane?!!! I can\'t believe you\'re doing this to me. You\'re an awesome writer, and this is an awesome story!!! Aw man...sigh. I loved your fanfic, and I hope you write more in the future. Thanks for such a story-thrill! Also, funny line: \"and best friend to The Boy Who Just Wouldn
person Alicia
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo this story is tight,son!LOL hey I hope somebody catches them like harry or ron,or the kiss in public for everyone to see!LOL great story!
person Monique
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was fabulous, awesome, wonderful etc... so sweet ended ohhh... by the way it was funny somehow but later it turned out to be sweet and realistic... don\'t knw how you did it but it was really so good! thanks sending it to me via mail. hugs.
person Jean
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m totally loving this story. I feel bad for Ron... (me being a Ron/Hermione shipper) but I love the way you made them develop their feelings before getting to the sex. It\'s so hard to find a story that doesn\'t just have smut. Keep up the great work... I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!
person Amonara
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can\'t tell if I\'m going to be sad that it will be over next chapter or excited at such a long chappie. Probably both! You\'ve done a wonderful job so far!
person Selina
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey... cool chapter. Peeing scene is hilarious! Are you planning on continuing this story for a long while after they unswitch or is it going to stop? I would prefer the former... Well, it sucks that AFF has been down... I went away for the weekend and got on a computer to read this story and it wasn\'t working! Today was my first day to access a computer for awhile... anyway, hope you update soon!
person Tandy
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! Awesome Story!!!! Loved it (just in case you couldn\'t tell from all the exclamation points)!!!
person Amonara
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters were awesome! Wowie for Chap. 2! Finally! Although, I think it\'s \'smitten\' as the past tense term. Anyways. *shuts her English major mouth* I loved it! Great writing as usual!