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for Why Draco Should Not Be Using Tampons

by Padfoot

person Miki
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the last two chapters, and I\'m glad that they waited for this moment. It makes it special.

I didn\'t mean to imply that you couldn\'t make them passionate. Just that I didn\'t get a sense of latent desire.

Anyway, I really like the plot because it isn\'t too complicated and they didn\'t do anything that caused the other some sort of irreparable damage.

Are you going to continue so we see if Draco avoids becoming a Deatheater?
person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that i loved this story, before now i never really considered a H/D couple but now i love it! This could also be one of the funniest stories i have ever read! I laughed so hard while reading the first chapters when they were in each others bodies and stuff. Great job!!!
person tash
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was sooo good. funny, sweet and romantic all at the same time. plewritwrite a sequel or just another story coz that was brilliant
person Aileen
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! I loved the ending, and the un-censored smut! Thanks for sending the two chapters to me! Much appreciated. I loved how you made Draco defy his father in the last showdown, well in detail anyway since it wasn\'t lucius demise. I loved the epilouge as well, the discription you put into their life after school and after marriage was great, especially how he kept putting on sunblock, and the \'most passionate display of public affection\' and snape\'s reaction to it.....*giggles*
I look forward to your next story, especially the Lilly and James one you talked of earlier.

well happy thoughts to you, and keep writing Your great!

Aileen
person Anna
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMJUSTJUST LOVED IT ^_^! Thanx for something to read! It was great! If you feel like it, I jusettyetty much started my own a while ago ( I must update) I have two Fics going on www.fanfiction.net - http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1934314 ( Pretty Short chapters so far!) and
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.ptorytoryid=1930814 ( Working on bigger chapters!)

- Well I hope you write more Fics soon! Talk to you later

*~Anna
person Drey
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::Gives a big round of applaus:: Wonderful story! I enjoyed it very, very much!
person undertheumbrella
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I thought it would be longer, but the sudden cut-off\'s not something to complain about either. Though.. I suppose Hermione\'s never probably going to know that Draco wasn\'t her first partner, now would she? Oh well =P It would have been interesting to read about Herm getting all riled up again followed by tons of momentous make-up sex :D Brilliant job on the story! I look forward to reg thg the next =)
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure you knowt rit rimming actually entails.
person Poetrychik
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was loving this story BEFORE they got together. You\'re totally burning up my computer screen! :) Keep up the great work! :)
person emmy
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! This is the greatest story!!!
I wonder what ron and harry will say when they find out...Anyway keep up the excelent work!