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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person Kel
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start. :) I really like the fact that Draco doesn\'t automatically turn away from his father, and I hope you update soon!
person Lana
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good so far, I hope you update soon.
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. The opening and the Malfoy planning. Please update soon.
person Bambu
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a particularly interesting beginning. Draco is distressed by his news, but loyal enough to his father to tell him. I like that, as well as the entire situation. Very intriguing hook.
person Draco_Fan
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THis is really good so far! I\'ve been waiting for a good veela story with Draco and Hermione!
person Velvetina
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How cool, i\'ve often seen Draco go to the good side but Lucious never! It doesn\'t matter that his reasons arn\'t exactly good ones, thats just typical Malfoy but its cool. I can\'t wait to see Draci \"wooing\" Hermione!
person trinaa
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I\'m looking forward to reading more. Update soon.
person Illmantrim
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, delicious, and excellent story! I love the beginning and ending lines, tying it together!
person jeannett
schedule March 21, 0000 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story..please continue, i wouldn't mind seeing ron seperated from his body parts, or just missing a few teeth.