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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What\'s up?Well I\'m just here to tell you how good this story is....I really like the plot!Good Job!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Update soon please.I like it so far.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t usually read Draco/Hermione stories since my favorite couple is Hermione/Snape, but I have to say this is a funny story. I can totally see Lucius turning against Voldemort for his own means. And I thought the scene at the train station with the Malfoys looking at Hermione was hilarious. Keep up the wonderful writing. And I wouldn\'t worry about some of the characters being off. This is what fanfiction is for after all.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story you have so far, very creative and original. Write more soon.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually, your story doesn\'t necessarily need Lucius to not have gone to Azkaban. He could have gone and that would have been another reason for the ease in his defection. Lucius could have taken the imonmeonment as a reality check - he could have advised Voldemort against the Dept of Mysteries fiasco, but they wouldn\'t listen to him. Feeling that his position is somewhat shaky because of Bellatrix\'s return, and that the mad Lestranges are leading the Death Eaters \'off\', Lucius might therefore take the opportunity presented to him by the Seer\'s prophecy to defect.
Good chapter 2, nonetheless. I look forward to more.
Good chapter 2, nonetheless. I look forward to more.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i would really love if you could email me when you put up an update! i love the way this story is going..its different fro all the others but in a brilliant way! i love it!!!! its..bloody brilliant! hope u update asap!!!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cooly! very good story! it helps to read stories like this....and wow, another person who hears people talking in your head!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful beginning! I can\'t wait to see the sparks fly between Draco and Hermione. Please post the next chapter soon!!!
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I NEVER review for fictions, but I just have to on yours!!! This is by far *the* best plot I have ever read, and you were brilliant for coming up with it. Not only that, but you write beautifully, which is such a relief, considering how writing could turn the best plots into awful stories. You have to continue this, especially since I reviewed, and please do it quickly. Right now there is a distinct lack of good Draco/Hermione fics, and this one awesome!!! Just wanted to let you know how great this story (and you) are!!! Update soon!!!