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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person prettywicked
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! Can\'t wait to see Hermione\'s reaction when she finds out! Please update asap!
person Jade
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I love the Veele parts, but you need to update more often! I can\'t wait for the next chapter
person Arissa
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another het Veela!Draco story *cheers*
Great story so far. Draco is so cute when he is all jealous and posessive *g* Can
person deblovesdragon
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic Ash. It\'s really fun and I look forward to it everyday.

Clever of Draco to give Hermione that book. She\'ll figure it out in no time. Kind of like when she figured Lupin out in PoA.

BTW, it\'s Lavender with an \'er\', not \'ar\'.

Cheers.
person Lexie
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! This fic is absolutely brilliant! It\'s well written and everyone is in character. Draco may have changed a little, maybe so he could get Hermione, but he still has a temper that rivals Ron. I love how you\'ve portrayed the Malfoys. They\'re sly and cunning but at least Lucius and Narcissa treat their son well. And Hermione is confused and angry... I just can\'t wait what Draco would do and how Hermione would react.

And you have a creative mind. Draco can invade his mate\'s dreams and he can also feel pain when he and his mate are threatened. I love that!

And I\'m hoping that you take the time to develop their relationship, but not too long though. ;) And I can\'t wait for the smut. You write them tastefully and they\'re always sexy.

person kella
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome! i can\'t wait to read more.

oh, and just so you know, i wouldn\'t put it past lucius to have the reaction that he did. power is only worth something if you\'re on the winning team.
person heaven
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your plot and writing. Keep up the fine work, and I look forward to new chapters. :)
person Luna_Kat04
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I still can\'t get over how much the Veela theme interests me. Post again soon! I can\'t wait to find out Hermione\'s response to the Veela book.
person Luna_Kat04
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this. Curious as to the whole Hermione not being Head Girl and also looking forward to the confrontations between Hermione and Draco as he moves in on her. I can\'t wait to see potions class! Keep up the good work!
person Lessa
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How interesting! It is my suspicion that Hermione is a little more inclined towards Draco than he thinks. Not that she\'s not going to give him a rough time of it. I look forward to her making him earn her love and respect it would teach him some maturity. Keep up the good work I look forward to the next chapter.