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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person Anon
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Make her sleep with Ron! She can fall for Draco afterwards but make her sleep with Ron! I hate it when Hermione is made to be this wimpy little thing, she needs to take charge, that\'s the kind of girl she is.
person kella
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no!!! she can\'t do that.
silly girl.

bah! you;re going to need to update soon .

oy, that part against the wall was hot ... yum.
person poetrychik
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooh! You bad girl! Sleep with Ron??? Talk about pushing Draco\'s buttons!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work! :)
person Red
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
[He watched as she nibbles her lip and crosses and uncrosses her legs.] The first/second/third person pov switched a few times, but other than that it was a good chapter. Sleep with Ron, eh? Hee hee.
person firestarter
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Hermione is asking for trouble... Good chapter I really like this fic.
person dana
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chap cant wait for more hope we dont have to wait that long for the next one ;0)
person xoulblade
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo that does not sound like a good idea, Hermione.............anyway I\'m enjoying your story, keep it up and update soon!!
person Morrigan
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! I love the way you\'ve written the characters, especially Narcissa. Please update soon!
person the earth guide
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another chapter. I LOVE the veela plotline, it allows Draco to be bad in a very very good way ;). Incidently, your characterization is great. I actually read the library scene two or three times, I could totally see Ron behaving that way and I love the way you got into Draco\'s head at that moment. Keep up the good work and update soon

person Raven
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this fic. Can\'t wait to see where you take this. The scene when Hermione fiout out is going to be good, I can tell.