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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person Meredith
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying your story and I hope you keep writing. I love the idea of "mates".
person Krys
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better! I love it :) I can't wait till Hermione finds out she is Draco's mate. I can't wait to read more :)
person Emma
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant storyline, really nice and all. I
person fran
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful hun!

I can't wait for the next chapter <3
person scifichick774
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the longer chapter. Don't suppose I could talk you into making all of them that long? No? Damn. Still, possessive Draco was great. And I like that he didn't just shove Pansy aside since they have that history there. Nicely done.
person JenJen
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, good writing good plot. I am a little disappointed that Ron was making a bet to sleep with Hermione but it is your story and it is about Draco! LOL
person Draco_Luva
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You HAVE to update soon! Email me when you do! I love this story so much and it sounds like this could actually happen!
person DDMalfoy
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the premise of this story, but I find the pacing too slow. I'm sorry I see too mangsangst ahead. I don't understand why he's acting that way towards her knowing she will rebel at being ordered around, and he doesn't want to tell her she's his mate. Good story but too much drama/angst for me.
person Apollonia
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She's not Draco's bitch? That's what she thinks! LOL I love that line! Did you know that there is a Draco/Hermione story called "Draco's Bitch"? One of the best I've ever read. It even has a sequel - Hiding Hermione. Anywho, glad you've updated this gem of a story. :) Can't wait to see Hermione succumb to Draco's advances and become his bitch for real! ;P
person elementaldeity
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to go to aff and find that you updated, and a long one too. I can't wait to see more. This is very interesting. Keep up the great work.

elementaldeity