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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person jaceni50
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I don't know if I've told you before, but love the length! :) Can't wait till the next update and love the fact that it's a long veela story that still has me coming back for more. :D
person jraskin
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please, please, please update soon!!!!!!I really want to see what happens next!
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. Thanks for the update. I so enjoy this story. Looking forward to Ginny's reaction. lol HG4eva
person kayemkay
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha. I forgot about this story! I was itching for a veela Draco/Hermione fic too! I loved the latest update! Ginny's just awesome, leaving her poor bf in such a state! Yay! They finally did the deed! Awww and now they're all happy and in love! *does the happy sappy dance*
person apkblack
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just starting this story and glad I am. Well written.

Am surprised that you chose to have Draco be honest with Dumbledore, and I'm assuming that Lucius was in his letter as well. Thought you'd do the standard thing of the Malfoys playing it close to the chest and lying their way through getting into Dumbledore's good graces. I'm glad you did it this way. I hate "Dumbledore is a dupe or an idiot" stories.

Anyway, on to the rest. Am enjoying it.
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a beautifully written chapter! So they have finally bonded. I can't wait to read about Ginny's response to the news of Hermione being Draco's mate. I also am anxious to read about Draco's parents reaction to the news that they have bonded. I'm sure they will be relieved. I was thrilled that you updated again. This is an exceptional story.
person jade2099
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing! You've created a story where I actually LIKE Lucius Malfoy. :) No small feat that. :) This is simply amazing. I love how things have been growing between Draco and Hermione...hell, I'd fall in love with the git too if I were her! :) I'm looking forward to your next update!
person mhaj78
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
okay, so i can't tell how often you've updated this, only that you just did so recently...but let me say OH. MY. GOSH. This story is AMAZING!! I see you first started writing it six years ago, but I think i might die if it only gets a chapter every 3 months or so. it's so, so great! great story, fantastic writing, awesome character development...i look forward to stalking this story regularly for updates! job well done! :)
person dragon37
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you write more soon.
person alina290
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for so long. Thank you so much for this chapter. Blaise and Pansy are such cowards. I hope you will post the next chapter soon. Once again thank you so much.
Liz