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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person mariteri
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm going to try e-mail hypmatism. You are getting sleepy...eyes are heavy...you wilel tel the need to write your story faster...LOL! I'm loving it. Keep up the good work!
person Rain
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One of the most compelling Draco/Hermine stories I have ever read. You stay completely in character and that is so rare for this couple. Please update soon.
person Rina
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Draco/Hermione fanfics that I have ever read. The tension between the two characters is fantastic. It's great to read a story where Hermione doesn't quickly fall into Draco's arms. Keep up the great work and can't wait to read the next installment.
person Sloane
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story that you've written. I haven't read too many Veela Draco stories but this one is quite captivating. I like the way you've depicted his family and the fact that he's not so one dimensional. I am getti wee wee bit peeved with Hermione though but I assume that you'll be resolving her obstinacy in the near future. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
person Nastassja, Jessenia, Leah
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely the best story we read so far!! we love Hemione and Draco action! update asap!!!
person lilil
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwww!! So far so GREAT! (NOt just good but great) Update soon plzzzz
person malikat
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was really great, i can't wait until ther next chapter, it's almost like a real Harry Potter story!
person sanna
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story! i'm rereading this for the millionth time while waiting for you to update :) btw, i realized that the pansy in chapter 6 is kind of different from the pansy you mentioned in earlier chapters. first shes throwing herself at draco, then draco is telling her she's his longtime friend and that he's not in love with her. just thought i'd point it out. other than that, youre doing a great job, keep up the good work :)
person Eros
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love ur fic .Draco is soooo cute plssssssssssss continue it
person Katze
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I'm really enjoying it so far...keep it up!