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by AshleyZ

person Bambu
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Having just finished chapter 7, I'm delighted that you've moved them beyond their stalemate. I can't imagine that their course will be completely smoothed over as a result of Hermione knowing the truth... but I'm glad to see you move beyond the complete stubbornness between them. If only they can now find a way to meet in middmiddle without Dumbledore's intervention. And, I can only wonder at how Ron is going to react to her turning him down... there's so much scope for the imagination here.
person draco's fan
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story.I'm glad that she finally knows the truth about everything, I can't wait for more Draco/Hermione kissing.

~Rach~
person LMN
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I'd pop in and let you know that I'm loving this, Ashley :)

This is fast turning into one of my favourtie Veela!Draco fics and I can't wait to see what happens next *wink*
person Luna
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic is really coming along. I love their conversations. Although, it's just unusual that Hermione would do something awful to get back at Draco even when she was angry. Unless...Draco really affects her that much, which is a good thing.

So far things are going quite well, despite Hermione anger. I just hope Draco will not do anything stupid to jeopardize his slowly-growing relationship with Hermione. Well, not really relationship, but at least they're being civil to each other and Hermione is willing to know what's going on.

I would love to know Hermione's feelings and reaction once she learns more about veelas. I have a question though, what about love? I mean, there is the devotion, but does it exactly mean love? What if Draco wasn't a veela? Would he love her? My impression is that they will be faithful because it's "prgrammed". Or I'm just overanalyzing your fic? I'm sorry if I'm doing that. *smiles sheepishly*

But really, this is one of the really well-written stories out there. I love it. I hope you write the next chapter soon! :)
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loooove this fanfic. It is such an interesting twist on the Hermione/Draco relationship. I can't wait to see how this develops further!
person apparateawaydm
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought u had forgotten this story and i wasss soo sad. cuz i love this story! ur plot and concept is perfect and different! pleeeeaasssesssee dont wait soooo long to update!! this chap ROCKED
person eve/roarke
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have just read the story again date 26/9/04 Please Where is our new chapter, 2 chapters would be better
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should have 6 stars for one of the cleverest fanfics I have ever
read.
person Red
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack! It's nearly been a month since you've updated! Hop-to woman!
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will be honest. when I first saw your story when you it was posted way back when I pasted over it think oh god not another one. But I chose to read it and now wish I had sooner. Hermione and Draco aren't OOC which I love more then anything so many stories have them falling madly in love after a few moments (like mine shamefully). I've fallen in love with your stroy and turely and honestly can't wait moremore. Kudos and keep it. From now on I have to remember not to judge a story from it's title. thanks for that reminder. Good lucking. Once again Kudos!
PAP
person eve/rouke
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! love the story totally different to any other granger/malfoy. The sexual tension is briliant!

I hope the explosion when it happens will warrant the expetations!!!!