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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for finally updating. And your welcome about mentioning chapter 5. It was nothing. This story is getting better and better. I wonder what Harry\'s reaction will be. I can\'t wait for Malfoy to seduce Hermione,
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I love the build up. Tension is rising. Keep it coming!
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so much...was so happy to see more posted. this is awesome!
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An update! *faints*
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked chapter 9. I really love this fic. I think that you are a really good writer. I really want to see what happens when Hermione has another confrontation with Ron. Keep up the good work.
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can see why you have so many hits and so few reviews - I don\'t know what to make of your story. And after 7 chapters - I don\'t know if that\'s necessarily a good thing. Your concept is good, but there are points you should have developed that would have given so much erotic depth to your writing. I mean, this is adultfanfiction, not the fluffy stuff we find on ff.net. Like the fact Draco can make her dream whatever he wants. Why hasn\'t Hermione been having erotic dreams? And the characters are a little on the OOC side of unfriendly. My suggestions: Don\'t be discouraged, introduce sensuality in not-so-subtle ways, and leave characters who have not point of being there OUT.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, Ash. I have been reading it since you first posted it. Please update soon!!!I\'m dying here. Draco/Hermione fics are awesome. Now I\'m hooked with the veela stories.
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please oh please update!!
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really really really really good
JUST UPDATE
JUST UPDATE
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really do not know how to word this, however, your story is very good, and I do not know what trouble
other reader's or fanfic writers are having. But I think its time to cover your back.
Have you considered Pureblood on the Ashwinder site, I just do not want to loose reading your work, if I am being
a nagging reader, I apologize and will continue to suffer the AFF net. I really love the site, but I have only been
able to log on for more that a while before it goes off, or I have been unable to access the site at all.
other reader's or fanfic writers are having. But I think its time to cover your back.
Have you considered Pureblood on the Ashwinder site, I just do not want to loose reading your work, if I am being
a nagging reader, I apologize and will continue to suffer the AFF net. I really love the site, but I have only been
able to log on for more that a while before it goes off, or I have been unable to access the site at all.