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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person Jess
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I\'m so glad you updated again. I love this fic, it\'s very well written, and Draco and Hermione are still pretty in character. Please keep going and update soon! =)
person dragon34
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!!!!!!!!Another chapter, I was almost giving up hope, but excellent as always. I really can\'t wait to read the next chapter.

jeannette
person anna
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really really like please e-mail me when the next chapter is done!
person lilil
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:):)
person Meredith
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Keep it coming.
person gofer
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job, i thought the plot line was an awesome idea!
person Bambu
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s really great to see that you\'ve chosen to take your time with this story, to let the natural progression of the years\' long distrust between Hermione and Draco slowly be overcome by the current situation. I particularly like how you\'re handling the physical aspects of the relationship. Draco could abuse his connection with Hermione to overwhelm her completely... but he seems bright enough to know that she wouldn\'t be willing and he wants her willing. Instead he\'s letting it develop more slowly, which is very difficult for him, and which will ultimately be more rewarding. Hermione, for her part, is confused and struggling with the change in her circumstance but is opening up to Draco and even finding him fascinating and enticing. All in all, this is a very good chapter. I hope you decide to take them to Malfoy Manor for the hols and I can hardly wait to see what will happen, not only there, but when her friends find out. I can imagine that she wants to be on more sure footing with Draco before that point. Such a nice progression in this story, it\'s been a pleasure to read.
person shivingdeep
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFGGGGGG..WHAT A GRRRRRRRRREAT STORY U GOT HERE ASH!! I FREAKIN LUV IT! I am so enjoying this so much..ya just don\'t know. The twist you got here is brilliant and so intriguing. PLEASE UPDATE SOON..I\'M CRAVING MORE.......Thanks for writing this. I have more to say but it\'s all jumbled up in my head right now..lol...It\'s really an amazing story...
person eve/roarke
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great!! you updated my favourite veela story ever, I just love the sexual tension that
is building all the time.

Got to admit I was slightly disappointed that Christmas with the Malfoy\'s did\'nt happen
at Christmas time, but really thats because was wishing for more updates.

Found your other stories, they are good too!! Keep writing please
person Keely
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.. I found it and I am very glad that I did. I hope that you update soon. I don\'t have an account on this site so I was wondering if you could email me when you updated, you don\'t have to, but I would appreciate if you did. Thanks.