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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic update! And a new adventure! Oh, I was just thinking of this story recently!
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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens!! Great chapter, so worth the wait!!
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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think my favorite part of this story is the realism you add to it. Thank you for a lovely and honest first time. :-) I am now sending you warm, encouraging thoughts in hopes that it spurs you on to update that much soone. ;-) Thank you again, HG4eva
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
um i dont know if you have noticed this yet but there are no spaces in ch.24. its just like one huge paragraph lol. the chapter was great and i cant wait for more updates!
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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT story, I absolutely loved it. I did see a few spelling mistakes in earlier chapters nothing to fret, anyways can't wait to see how it end and get some really juicy chapter ;). Good job *thumbs up*.
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for a new update. I have completely fallen in love with this story. Hope it's up soon. Great job keeping them in character.
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February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Amazing, Fabulous, Spectacular, Sweet, Incredibly Romantic....There aren't enough adjectives in the English language to say how great this story is. I can't wait for more!!!! I love how real you made their first time - the fumbling, the speed of it and her not orgasming. It's nice to see a little reality in our fantasies.
Can't wait for the updates.
Can't wait for the updates.
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update soon please im sitting here on edge waiting to see what happens next....i love it so far though....
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK, I've just finished reading everything that you've written and let me just say that I LOVE IT!!!!!! I am definitely looking forward to another chapter!!!!
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January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Despite the fact that I usually avoid Hogwarts-years stories, have just finished a marathon read of the whole thing and am so glad I did. Well done. Seeing when it was first published, am glad to see that you've updated it ... lovely chapter.
One thing I loved particularly about it was that you made their first time really feel like a first time. Yes, he had his whole veela reaction, and they took care of the ritual part, but once they got to the rest of it, it was just like it should be (and probably was for most of us). Awkward, painful, but life-changing. Great choice on your part. It would have been too easy to use the whole veela-mate-intensity thing to make a real bodice-ripper passionfest, but it wouldn't have had the impact that this did. Really beautifully done.
Hoping you update again VERY soon.
One thing I loved particularly about it was that you made their first time really feel like a first time. Yes, he had his whole veela reaction, and they took care of the ritual part, but once they got to the rest of it, it was just like it should be (and probably was for most of us). Awkward, painful, but life-changing. Great choice on your part. It would have been too easy to use the whole veela-mate-intensity thing to make a real bodice-ripper passionfest, but it wouldn't have had the impact that this did. Really beautifully done.
Hoping you update again VERY soon.