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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person Anon
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!
person Jamie
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post more soon!! I\'m dying to read more of this story!
person BrujaPeqinta
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brillant plot , the characters are not out of character and the smutt is great as well .but i still am wondering why they are not shagging like bunnies!?
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Coolies.... hehehe... i did see that movie with john travolta and i forgot about that part! I honestly forgot it. I was just reading another story called \'Malfoys Mate\'. Your ideas of Veelas are so different but they\'re still great! It\'s lovely to read ppl\'s different opinions on what Veelas are. That other story is extremely sexual but I rather enjoyed it and her description of \'Veela Draco\'. I can\'t wait for you to update!!
person curlyq2713
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story so far! just read the entire thing!! draco and hermione need to stop dancing around eachother and have things happen already!! hehe, keep up the good work!
person Stratyllis
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean you are not going to update anymore?
person sleephead
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more before i have reason to hurt you!!!!!! i really like this story plz write more!!
person Ashley
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your storie! This is one of the best I have ever seen!!! I really do think that the whole idea of this is intresting!!! And we share the same name!!! Later Babe!
person eve/roarke
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate the author note explaining things, but at the same time couldn\'t we have a chapter update to?

While typing this my bottom lips trembling and my big brown eyes are beseeching!!!! AS IT WORKED.

What about begging, please, pretty please, I\'m on my knees.

Best wishies.
person anon
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading it.

I actually liked the fact that Lucious accepted Granger as Draco\'s mate so easily. Granted it does feel a little unnatural, so I assumed there was some conniving reason behind it. But, being part-Veela himself, he knows that fighting who you\'re mate is is not possible. So I\'m glad you didn\'t do what it seems most authors here would try to do and that is have Lucius beat it out of Draco, or do something equally horrible.

Granted, I still am waiting for the part where we discover Lucius has a foot hold in both sides of the war, just incase he doesn\'t believe Draco...

I suppose I\'ll just have to read the rest now, right? =)

Good story.