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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person lusi
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is perfect.
person Sisilaya
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, and I seriously mean it. You manage to change Draco drastically (I mean, a Veela isn\'t just something) while still keeping him in character. Also the display of emotion and the constant tension between Draco and Hermoine is what kept me sticking to the story, but now I\'m getting more anxious to see what they would be like when they don\'t have all the other student looking on their fingers ^^. I can\'t wait to read the Malfoy Manor chapter, decoration is always goood! XD New chappies, please!

~Sisilaya
person Donavon.
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I used to check every day, then it went to every week, now its every fortnight.
I sometimes think that I will just forget for story. Then you update, and the writing
just warms the senses, and I go back to checking a lot more often.
I\'ve come to a conclusion, Ashleyfanfic is addictive. I\'m sunk.

Brilliant chapter, thank you, xmas treat Christmas at the manor?

person mira
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww.. compromises:) Beautiful and looong chapter!! Loved every word, update sooon!
person delyn
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter! You have draco/hermione characters perfected! Please keep going ~ quickly!
person Krystyn
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Please update!?! This story is amazing and we\'ve been waiting too long...can you update...please...?
person liz
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that the next chapter comes out soon... it really is really good... I recommend it to any one...
person B
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loove it! You really know how to write. I cant wait for more.
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must admit this was the story that drew me into actually putting my own Draco-veela ideas to pad. Thanks! Would love to see you update this story. There are so many unanswered questions.

Good \'Til the Last Drop,
Cappuccino
person Sunny
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Girl you have to update soon...I love fic man...everytime I see it I have to read it....I need to know whats gonna happen next...I absolutly NEED to know....so please please please update soon....thanks!!!