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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!
This is my first review!
Well... first of all sorry for my English, I\'m italian.
Second of all I love your fanfic! All the times the waiting period is killing me, but I guess it\'s necessary (Especially if the chapter are as long as yours are)! Though why authors should have a life of their own, beside to finishing their fanics, is beyond my comprehension! ;p
What can I say more? Keep writing as you do! and if you\'ll feel this irresistible impulse to make Draco and Hermione do something material while at the Manor ... my soul would be yours!
Bye!
This is my first review!
Well... first of all sorry for my English, I\'m italian.
Second of all I love your fanfic! All the times the waiting period is killing me, but I guess it\'s necessary (Especially if the chapter are as long as yours are)! Though why authors should have a life of their own, beside to finishing their fanics, is beyond my comprehension! ;p
What can I say more? Keep writing as you do! and if you\'ll feel this irresistible impulse to make Draco and Hermione do something material while at the Manor ... my soul would be yours!
Bye!
schedule
October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found that Hermione was not handling the situation with the aplomb that one would normally expect of her. She was rather immature, no?
Wonderful writing...frustrating and fantastic!
Update soon...
GM
Wonderful writing...frustrating and fantastic!
Update soon...
GM
schedule
October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an absolutely wonderful story. There were maybe under 20 grammatical errors in all. Fantastic. I loved the plot and the way the characters evolved. YOU HAVE TO FINISH IT SOON!!!!
schedule
October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Boy, aren\'t you on schedual? Christmas is around the corner. Anyway, great chapter. Update soon.
PS. You owe us a huge make up chapter for all the fighting and the bikering you made Draco and Hermione go through!!!
PS. You owe us a huge make up chapter for all the fighting and the bikering you made Draco and Hermione go through!!!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 - I found this story last night again? I\'m not sure I read the beginning but seem to have missed the majority of the story if I did review earlier. Anyway, I am really enjoying it and the care you are taking in building it. There is no way Hermione would fall into his arms in your story...she\'s much too strong willed. I\'m looking forward to finishing the remaining chapters here and looking forward to you writing more.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate you.Hermione should be Head Girl! Not Parvati Patil! Or whatever her name is.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow..this is probably one of the best veela stories ive read thus far. you\'re doing a really good job
schedule
October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, things are moving along quite nicely. Hermione needs to become a little more sensitive and open-minded to Draco and what he is facing. But then I can see her viewpoint...the boys were to first ones to befriend her back in year one.
Anyway, I can\'t wait for more chapters...update soon.
Anyway, I can\'t wait for more chapters...update soon.
schedule
October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t wait until christmas holidays come up. *hee-hee*
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww please more more and was great i love it and please update soon and it till next time later for now
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