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for Beautiful Disaster

by AshleyZ

person pickletrickchic@hotmail.com
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and was plesantly suprised at the new chapter. thanks for doing such an awesome job on the story .
person Bek Allen
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked. I feel so sorry that Narcissa and Lucius have to put up with the Aurors and Ministry people coming in and trashing their stuff. They should know better (The Ministry people). Once again, I love the way you humanize Narcissa and Lucius, even Draco to an extent. Can't wait to see what else is in store for the happy couple. ;)

Bek

PS: It was awesome to see this updated :)
person serena_marie06
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!!! especially the biting part how funny I really liked this though and am really really excited about future chapters.......
person Stag
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

AN UPDATE!I found that the passage from the book was remarkably executed - it seemed so reliable!

Keep it up! Possesive Veela DRACO all the way!
person T
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!
person Donavon.
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. I am now going to ring 999 for the ambulance. I am not sure if I am suffering a heart attack or
have gone into shock!

Brilliant update...first time I ever disliked Arthur. Hope to suffer shock or whatever soon.

Best wishes, Donavon.
person T
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOW FANTASTIC ARE YOU?!

I wrote a review a few hours ago and
I was sooooo shocked but VERY HAPPY
that there is another chapter up!

So thank you and please continue with your AMAZING work!

Love T
person samantha [not signed in]
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CUTE!!! I love it. Awww, they're such DARLINGS!!UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
person firewall
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yippee! Another chapter! I found your portrayl of Arthur rather interesting because when you think about it, his job would indicate that he be rather tough and hardlined. So I found the callousness at Malfoy Manor which he displayed a real possibility. This was balanced beautifully with the fun in the snow by Hermione and Draco. Thank you for sharing and I'll look forward to a new chapter.
person firewall
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just glanced through some of the other reviews when I posted just now. Donovan, I have to say I agree with your earlier comment this month and appreciate your dedication to your readers. Ashley, your story is incredible and I hope that you find it within you to continue to satisfy our need to read your words.