rate_review Reviews

That was awesome!!! I absolutely loved it. Makes a girl wish she had a Draco all of her own! *sigh*

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

This is one of my favorite Draco and Hermione one-shots. Humorous, fluffy, and a nice steamy sex scene. I especially like how Hermione\'s not particularly rude to Draco in the beginning, and does get coffee with Draco and such, but she\'s not particularly responsive to his attentions either. George and Fred and Narcissa all add extra amusement. Especially Narcissa\'s reaction to catching them in the act!

See, the problem with writing a story in response to a challenge is it forces you to insert a lot of unnecessary junk that detracts from the main storyline. There was more exposition here than plot, and I found myself saying \"who cares?\" more than once in regards to the senior Malfoy\'s death, the number and provenance of Molly\'s grandchildren, the various charities to which the Malfoys contribute, the extent of Fred and George\'s success, Draco\'s whole history with Snape, etc. I realized at the end that most of that was part of the challenge, but it didn\'t add anything interesting to the story.

Back-story and tangents shouldn

Cool story. Thumbhumbs up. :)

That was awesome! *grins* Loved it!

Great story! Really funny imaginative and with hot smut.

This was good. I loved it!