rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Oh yeah...The chapters should be a little longer...
And going back to the Dark Side is a bit drastic,but its ur story so....
I would read it..lol

Congras on ya new baby and hope u stiil carry on the story

Great story i can\'t wait to read more and i can\'t wait to see who this person is update soon.

your biggest fan
kristle

This was a good chapter, but now it sounds more like Severus isn\'t any good in bed. Or is it that he doesn\'t want to get out of control and hurt her and she doesn\'t understand that?

I am glad that you have taken up my challenge and i love it so far please update soon by the way who is the guy and if you need a beta reader or any help i would love to.

I\'m glad someone took up this challenge, but I\'m not quite sure I like that he is willing to go back to the dark side because of her.

Those are not chapters. They aren\'t even whole pages. I suggest waiting between updates so you can post chapters rather than paragraphs.

Well I think you should continue. I have to say I\'m not crazy about Severus thinking about going back to the dark arts either, but since yu said its important to the story that he\'s thinking this I\'ll take your word for it. I suppose I can understand the way he feels, since the rug has bpullpulled from under him and he\'s feeling pretty miserable. I do however agree with the review who said you should make the chapters a bit longer. Its hard to get much information or to even get into a story when you have so little to go on. I would not mind waiting a few days if I know the reward will be a long chapter with some signficant storyline going on.

I\'m curious to see where you are headed with this.