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wat wood hav been gd is if snape fucked em too

Please stop! Your wasting the site

Makes no sense, no character depth, nothing meaningful, just a whole lot of mindless babble. Oh and ad in highly fractured plot sequences.

Well. I don\'t think I could have written worse than that even if I tried.

Congratulations.

Well...this gives new meaning to PWP...even the most basic porn fics should have SOME background in them! Or at least have some dialogue, or paragraphs! (does any of this ring a bell?) You obviously enjoy writing to have posted this, but please, for the rest of our sakes, keep your stories to yourself. Even for a first attempt this is pretty pathetic and unless a miracle occures, I don\'t think your writing will improve enough to warrant it being posted on this wonderful site. I\'m sorry to tear into you like this, but sometimes, the truth has to hurt.

Oh my God that is the worst fic I have EVER read! You can\'t even paragraph properly! Please do us all a favour and stop writing. The world will be a better place when you delete this terrible \"story\"

I suppose it was pretty good for a mentally retarded person.

Let me guess ... you\'re about 12?

In my time of reading fanfic, I have read some terrible ones. This is one of them. It was impossible to understand what was going on. Juices do not \"pour\" out.

Seriously, don\'t write again.