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for Part 2 of a school trip to ny

by Ohbaby125

schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Didn't like the ending..Harry, Ron, Draco and Hermione..no yuck!!
person luvhp
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HaHaHa, for a second there I thought you were going to have Snape join in, LOL.
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person amused
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story was just weird... are you sure youre old enough to be on this website?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WORST thing I've EVER read on aff.net. I'm thinking that there should be some kind of bad story filter or something on here...
person silvercat
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that THAT was a really weird ending. You also need to insert paragraphs, and do a little organizing.
person silvercat
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just an addition, that was a pretty good story, though. You should keep going, no matter what some a* holes say. They don\'t NEED to read it if they don\'t want to.
person Mayann
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol...i like it...but they were all out of character. wen i saw snape\'s name i thought hermione was going to ask him to join in then im like ewww...but then wen i read the rest i was just laughing. good job!