AFF Fiction Portal
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Blown Away
person sherrafina
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK. Someone is just making all this up right??? This isn\'t a REAL story is it???? If it is, that htis to bto be the most pathetic attempt yet. I will NEVER say that I am a good writer. I am definately NOT. But neither are you!
person sherrafina
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK. Someone is just making all this up right??? This isn\'t a REAL story is it???? If it is, than this has to be the most pathetic attempt yet. I will NEVER say that I am a good writer. I am definately NOT. But neither are you! How old are you???????
person Alibi
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cough* i must agree with everyone else..this story has no plot so really it is, is lame porn...you have some really corny lines in the fic and i find quite funny but sad at the same time. Draco and hermione are my favorite pairings so please do them justice by taking this story down and revise+get a beta
person Draco_luva
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow.... kinky
person a writing teacher
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Could you at least spell Hermione\'s name correctly? Is that too much to ask? Dt yot you have copies of the books you could check?

Writing gets better with practice, so you don\'t have to stop entirely, but you\'re not ready to share your work with the public. Give it a few more years (like when you\'re over 18).

Sorry.
person Nate
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please PLEASE stop writing this second!