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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?

Just saw this story and now I\'m glad I found it. When I read Marriage Vows I came to care for Olivia and wanted to know more about her. Thanks for granting me that wish.

Nicely written prequel.

But...I don\'t want it to be the end. Whining(sp) again. Thanks, it was a great companion piece. I\'ll be looking for the sequel!

Wow, who would have thought that the pure-bloods who disliked muggles believed in the oppression of women just as muggle men did. I guess the women they married must not be magical or they wouldn\'t have allowed such treatment. Is it then a requirement for pureblood men to marry incompetent witches so that they cannot fight back, or just incredibly stupid ones who don\'t know they have any real power to defend themselves?

Or perhaps it is you who has no understanding of the concepts of power and authority that would be involved between the genders were physical strength irrelevent to gaining control and autonomy.

Noooo, I\'m not upset. I\'m just all angsty because I know what happens to Olivia. She is turning out to be an interesting character. It is easier to see how Severus falls in love now. Thanks for the update. (only three weeks to go b4 baby is due)

EWWWWW, what a brute that Lucius is! And Severus is not much better. This story is going to be a fascinating read, to see how this Severus grows into the Severus of the sequel. What a powerful chapter!

YAY! I loved your story, Marriage vows, I\'m so glad you are writing another :) First chapter is great.!!!!!!

Great story i absolutely love it i can\'t wait to read more please update soon by the way is this story finished.

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kristle

2nd t I j I just want to cry! Poor Olivia...and we know what ultimately happens to her *sigh.* Thanks for starting a new story...well prequel.