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for The Tempest

by Bylle

person draco
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you must have a fantastic beta reader because your english has improved a lot. the first couple chapters in A winters tale were incorrect but the last chapters and this new story were great please keep updateing i love it
person snapey poo
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story please update soon i absoly loy love the character narcissa
person luna
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story you really bring out the back ground in the characters and i love it please update soon you are a goddess
person MAX IS BRILLIANT
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love your story so please update soon
person lucius
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story i can\'t wait to see how aldus and narcissa will get together please update soon
person selened
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the way you created your own background for Narcissa and I liked your image of Malfoy\'s parents. I look forward to seeing more from you soon.