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OH my God! Has she lost her mind? I can't wait to see the next chapter. I dearly hope you are planning to post it SOON!

Excelllent as always! I cant help but prefer Alice, Bethany just annoys me for some reason so I was routing for Alice! Hope to see more really soon. :)

*jaw drops*
omg. you are such an excellent writer! keep up the great work!

I must say that I feel sorry for Alice having to give Snape over to Bethany, its like a little child having to give their favorite toy to their younger brother or sister, hehe. I can't wait to see Alice's full reaction to the sudden loss of his attention and how Bethany deals with finally getting what she wants...if she does get it. Looking forward to new chapters! Keep up the great work!

I feel more frustrated then the girls :) its t tot to see you update so regularly! Keep it coming, just how long can he hold out?

You're killing me, you know that? You've captured the frustration and tension of Bethany and Alice. I'm like them: I want more! Your writing is excellent, as is your grasp of syntax and diction. A few uneven patches here and there, but on the whole a delightful and stimulating piece. Although I had not envisioned the formidable Potions master in this way, he is more than believable: he is exact. I would caution you to pay attention to punctuation. Sorry, but my academic backgound dictates that I must comment on the mechanics of your story as well as the essence of it. Well done, my dear, and get to writing. Apparently, I'm not the only one frustrated by your tantalizing delivery.

I, as many others I'm sure, have very much enjoyed this story and how you portrayed Snape. The OC's were very well developed (I can very much identify with Bethany's becoming a good student to try and please her Professor!) and the mounting tension between the two was also very pleasing, they slowly went from best buddies to jealous competitors, loved that. I much enjoyed your diction as well, do keep up the good work and I hope to see more chapters soon!

Ouch...harsh punishment indeed! Can't wait to read your next chapter....update soon

FINISH!!!! PLEASE!!!! lol. so cruel, yet so addictive

Hurry, update!!! lol, I love the story!!! :o)