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*sob sob* I want updates. ._.
Your story is the best snape story I've read so far O.O

fdh

Heh-heh, he's so evil ! Great portrayal of Snape !

I want updates dammit! >_<

I LOVE this story. It's so deliciously dark...oh, I wish Professor Snape would spank me! Could you send me an e-mail when you update? I am so ready for more punishments and subjugation.

I'm very much enjoying your story. I have no idea where I came across it but I, at some time or another, bookeked ked it in my 'to read' folder on my desktop. Once I began, I couldn't stop and then promptly rec'd your fic (see review above.) Your characterization of Snape is pretty much flawless. Are you at all familiar with Veresna Ussep fiction? If not, I'd encourage you to take a look. I think you both write a simliarly cruel, dominant and erotic Snapen a n a whole (and apart from the erotic content), I get the immediate sense that your Snape's dialog, manner of speaking and sadistic leaning in the classroom is very much parallel toon. on. You've done a very sophisticated job of demonstrating how Snape would conduct himself given the opportunity to exorcise both his physical needs as a man combined with his enjoyment in being cruel and sadistic. You take your time developing the two girls characterization which is a very wise thing to do and then you allow Snape to toy with them quite a bit psychologically before he even begins to indulge in his carnal pursuits. In BDSM play a good mind f**K is first and foremost over the physical. The fact that you haven't rushed the plot (and it does go a bit beyond PWP) allows for us readers to anticipate and salivate along with Alice and Bethany - very clever and classily done. Most BDSM fics cut right into the role playing right off and with no anticipation and build and it's just not as potent a storyline. Worse yet, it's all about instruments of torture, paddling, whips and chains.. you've managed to circumvent the over use of cliche trappin Lov Lovely work, Pelagian. I've consumed all of your chapters in a couple days and am now checking back daily for more. I am drooling for more, actually. Nay, BEGGING. :) Btw, I've showcased and reviewed your fic on my site Dark Potions: www.firefancies.com/darkpotions/main.htm under "Weekly Reads"

I am dieing for an update :) Excellent as always.

Let me begin by saying that I've read an enormous amount of erotic fiction. Heaps. Loads. Hundreds of books. Nearly two years of Snape fiction and I've never, ever come across a characterization of Snape that is as enticing as yours. He is cold, calculating, deliberate and very Slytherin. His manipulation of these two friends is absolutely brilliant. The careful foundation that he layers with each encounter has left me breathless in anticipation of more. My dear friend, Madelynex (webmistress of the Snape site Dark Potions - www.firefancies.com), recommended this story. She and I share a common vision of the "Perfect Snape": controlling, sly, a master of not only potions, but the erotic arts. You have fulfilled our deepest Snape-centric needs and for that, I thank you. I eagerly await the next chapter. Simply amazing work. I've pimped this story on my Live Journal, as has Madelynex. You have left me breathless - and that's not an easy thing to do.

*jaw hits floor...numerous times*

Um, this is by far the best work on Snape I've yome ome across. You are an astonishing writer.
Please finish the next chapter soon.
(!!!)

R.

Oooo how daring! I can't wait to see Snape's reaction to that! Update soon!!