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Oh Im hooked.. I just love ur story and Im happy I tumbled on it. Its great..lovely use of the language and very detailed characterization. Please update soon.. :-)

yay you updated! great chapter...and left with a cliff of course, your characters have such depth =) update soon

Am breathlessly awaiting the continuation of this story--I generally dislike OFC stories, but this one came highly recommended for its dead-on Snape characterization and skillful expression of BDSM relationships. I'm glad I decided to give this a read--you'one one a wonderful job! Keep at it, please!

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Yay! Love this chapter. Evil Snape makes me shiver and...oh just wow. This is an excellent story, absoutely wonderful and I can't wait to see what happens with these two girls. I suppose Snape will just use them up and spit them out when he's tired of them...but...oh I'll stop now since this is your story and you are handling it beautifully. It's about time some really good, accurate, BDSM fics were written. And I'm SO SO SO GLAD that you have not made one single mention of a Safeword. To be honest Safewords in fics with supposedly evilish Snapes (or Lucius Malfoy's) who use a safeword is just so out of charachter. You've got Snape so in charachter...and really, if the 'real' Snape were to engage in this sort of activity...as in sex with a student, this is exactly how I can see him going about it. After all, JKR did say he was a 'deeply horrible person' and you have captured the horridness in such a believable and such an erotic way.

Gah! You tease! This story is just...there are no words, but I'll give it a go. Magnificent. Perfection. All of my Snape dreams rolled into one. He's just so damned spot-on! I check morning, noon and night to see if you've updated. Madelyne told me a few days ago that she'd had some contact with you and I did my little BDSM!Snape fangirly dance. I cannot wait for a new chapter. Naked. On his desk. Oh, Severus, you Master of the Mind Fuck - what are you going to do to our little Bethany? We shall find out! Thank you for sharing your absolutely perfect vision of Snape with us.

The best Snape fic that I have read so far. I love hou pou portray Snape. Dominant, manipulative... dark, and that's how I see him. I'll be looking forward new updates. I not only enjoy it but inspires me to draw like this ink drawing of Snape and Alice that I did today: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/ladivinemarquise/tenth_snape_alice.jpg

Ack! Where is the next part??? How could you leave us hanging like that? LOL... Could you, um, not take too lto pto post it? Thanks.

o_O I'm soo glad I stumbled upon this fanfic! I just love it! I wasn't a very big fan of HP fanfic but yours changed that opinion. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you'll put it up soon.

Ch 18 - wasn't it his original plan (ch8) that he give them "lessons, in sexual pleasure"? So why is he "indignant" that she wants him, since that was part of the plan? He sure is taking his time in getting to the "lessons"!