rate_review Reviews

You try the patience of the reader, but you do so in an entertaining and tolerable manner filled with rich description and Angst. I am curious, half way through the episodes, how Snape will take advantage of them without handing over control of the situation as he steps over the line. It can only be in that they must be brought to need and like the attentions of the Potions Master more than their desire to escape from his control. I hope you bring this story to a conclusion before loosing interest as so many other authors of promising starts. If you don't I will personally curse you and your decendants for seven generations. You see I've got a little list of society's offenders, and you like they will never be missed.

This is nice...I\'m impressed

Absolutely brilliant. This has kept me hooked more than any fic has in a long time. The characters you have made up are extremely convincing, and your portrayal of Snape is also totally believable. My only problem is with the occasional lack of proofreading, but it\'s still better than most in that respect. Excellent work.

Would be a great story if it weren\'t so broken up. Bits missing, words cut off, sometimes entire sentances...and you know it has to be good due to the fact that this actually bothers me. I wanna read it all =P

omg

where is the site?

The excitement! I have being waiting for ages to Aff to get itself into gear and finally some new chapters... and what chapters! Congrats, excellent writing as always but i am impatient to see alice reenter the picture. Forgive me for being a bit slow but what site are you planning on moving to?

wherre is the new site?

where are you going to post?

What is the new site?