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for The Domino Effect

by jameschick

person ura
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Nice chapie. Beautiful actually. Love it!

Update soon!
person ura
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oh, good. Ron and Hermione did not get hurt. Still I wish Harry trusted them more.

Nice story!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shay
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Truely one of the best Harry/Draco fics out there. I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. The plot is excellent, and I always admire a good plot considering that's my own downfall. Love the drama and the almost regression to evil as well. And of course....you can't forget the couple....Harry/Draco rocks.

Keep up the good work

-Shay
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 22. Shopping in London, Ron and Hermione, kidnapping Draco, Ginny.... Oh this is utterly fantastic and I adore this story! More!
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter.
person Vasquaz
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! i loved that end bit!!!! best ever!

im glad that Ron and Hermione are moritfied...they soooo deserve it!

Woudln't it just be a bitch if Harry and Draco didn't go to Hogsmeade for the weekend so Nacissa culdnt get Draco? just to piss her off lol!

Here! have a cookie!! *hands jameschick a cookie* *munch munch* mmmm yu!
!

Good job!

-Vas
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter...cant wait to see what happens to ron and mione'
person Vasquaz
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHHH!!!! DRAMA!!!!!!!!!

Ginny is such an evil bitch!! lol!! i usually wouldnt care, but shes breaking up a HD!!!! that is unacceptable!! lol =)

well another good chappie! hope u keep writing!

-Vas
person Marley
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow1 your take on this is great. So ofte in writing fics orgeorget what exactly is happening to harry and everything he has already gone through. You get it though, power corrupts and even in the purest of hand it begins to twist the mind. Your characterization are good you really get inside their heads. umm yeah i stink at this review thing. Just wanted to let you know that this story is very good.
person Manhattan
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
jameschick:

Awesome storyline. It's a bit confusing here and there but overall, I'm really really enjoying it:) The first thing I did when I got up this morning was read the rest of your story since I was too tired to finish it last nigh.

Anyways, I don't usually like to read OOC stories but this one has such a nicely intricate plot behind it that I find that it doesn't bother me.
I hope you update soon because I would love to read on! About how Narcissa will deal with Draco and if Ginny gets what she wants. But I'm sure if Draco had the choice of money or Harry, he would choose Harry. But then again, he might not, for some reason.

Angst is great and I hope to see more of it AND sex:)

-Manhattan