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for The Domino Effect

by jameschick

person the zedmeister
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee! I loved the end of this chapter! I just hope that Harry doesn\'t do anything... permanent to Narcissa before she points them at Ginny. I wouldn\'t want her to get away scot free.

One thing bothered me, though: how come all that Voldemort wanted was for Draco to *say* that he would set up Harry? Wouldn\'t he have wanted him to swear an oath, or sign a magical contract, or *something*? I mean, Draco could just agree to do it so that Voldemort would stop cruciating him, and then not actually go through with the plan once he\'s free and back with Harry. Or... Voldemort could have used him as a hostage, without his cooperation, to send a message to Harry along the lines of \"we have your lover. Surrender or we\'ll send him to you in pieces.\"

So I just don\'t see the point of torturing him. He should have used a different threat to get him to cooperate, at least.
person dedmun
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is so freakin\' great. this chapter was totally unbelievable. lovin\' it sooo much! but how totally evil of you to end it right there. you suck sooo bad!

totally can\'t wait for the next one. totally PRAYIN\' it posts really soon. keep up the great work!
person aleera21
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey a new chapter. I always get really excited when I see you have a new chapter up...your story just keeps getting better and better. What a place to leave it though...!!! Please update soon!!!
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was wonderful and i am so HAPPY that ginny got what was coming to her
person Anastasia
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I wanted to let you know that I\'m enjoying your story, and that part 6 starts in a choppy way. I think aff.net ate some of it, and that chapter 15 is compleatly empty. I hope you can fix these problems, and let me know when your done. I would like to know that I\'ve read your whole story.

Thank you,
Anastasia
person Vasquaz
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you truely are a beautiful writer and I hope that you will keep writing ur stuff cuz its great!!

-Vas
person Priss368
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Too short! I wonder what Lucius will be like once the imperius curse is lifted? I hope that shows up somewhere in the future! Go get em Harry! Down with that rotten Ginny! Priss
person The Goddess Of The Void
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
rgjinspnb jn opikodgdkgosfhopknetnkon BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP... kjmgabineopejnojn

...*speechless (if you disregard the noises...)*

OMFG! I *love* this story...

Though this is somewhat CLIFFY-ISH... *dies*

*fangirls* ...*goes back to reread this last chapter* ...*dies again*

I can't wait for more... please continue, and keep up the FUCKING *EXCELLENT* work
person jadewtch
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is the best! i cant wait to see how harry saves malfoy (he will get saved right?)
person ura
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!

I just love this story! It is so goooooooooooooood.