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for The Domino Effect

by jameschick

person dedmun
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. you're an awesome writer. totally can't wait for the trip to london. wanna see what draco has planned for harry.

totally post again quick, fast, and in a hurry. keep up the great work.
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well the chapter was wonderful. i kinda...just a bit feel bad for goyle, ya k he he never really did stuff on his own and his actions finally caught up to him.
person Melagic
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't recall if I've reviewed before, but I've been following your story and really like it. I just wish you'd update more and write longer chapters. It's frustrating to wait over a week to read something and then be done in a little over 5 minutes. I'm not sure if I'm getting scared at the darkness I see in Draco and Harry.....especially Harry, or a little excited. I'll let you know. It's definately unnerving.
person Melagic
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have reviewed before, I was your first reviewer!! YAY sorry i just got excited.
person killerthecat
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit what an incredible fic! I am spellbound. I can't believe that Blaise just Avaded himself. Wow.....speechless here. Update soon please (I know that you just did today, but another chapter soon would be great)!
person sak
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting turn of events. I did not expect Goyle to want to stay a woman for the reasons he did. And Zabini--taking his own life rather than deal with the two powerful wizards after him. That's one way out. I don't know where this will go, but I anticipate more intrigue.
person aj
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
goodey gum drops that was good your a really good writer hope you right more on this fic and others like it. its great i cant wait to see what granger will do about the chamber
person Lea
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When you wrote '...as Crabbe, Goyle, Knott, McNair...' didn't you mean Nott instead of Knott? Hope ya update soon!
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
12-13 both good...seriously cant hermoine leave well enough alone some times? and zabini's torture, goyle sex change those were great!
person sak
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry\'s experience could not have been easy to share however edited and transmitted to Draco. I worry Harry is getting too dependent on Draco after his experience, but only time will tell if this is a real issue or not. I liked the conversation between Hermione and Ron as Ron realized what happened with his brother and Harry. Despite Draco, I like that they are supportive of Harry even if he is not letting anyone in. I look forward to more.