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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good fic and I can\'t wait to read more of it. However, the lyrics or whatever the italicized text is, is distracting. Putting it in once in a while, or maybe every few paragraphs if you feel it is necessary and fits with what is going on is fine. But every 2 lines or so? It keeps throwing me out of the story and wrecking the mood you are creating. I don\'t mean this to sound harsh or overly criticizing, I just thought I\'d mention it in case you weren\'t aware. But over all, it\'s a wonderful fic and I hope you update soon!
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, though I do hope it gets a bit happier. Afterall Draco and Harry love each other verry much and deserve to be happy.
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please continue iot as soon as possible, ok? i really can\'t wait to read more of it. thank you!
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are not making things simple for Harry and Draco. They truly feel for each other, but refuse to acknowledge it even after one night of passion. The development that they are both pregnant is intriguing. Will this bring them together and acknowledge what they feel or will they continue to deny themselves? I guess I will have to wait for the next chapters.
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SOO if James and Ls has had um Draco...or Harry...whichever maybe Lucius had Draco and James had Harry ok my brain can wrap that better then they just knocked up their own brothers? Um whoa. *snaps fingers* ::nods to barkeep for another pint::: that mean that there kids would be not only be brothers but first cousins? then ACK I give up \"I can do the only thing proper in this case!\" :::faints with Yuengling in hand:::: ((brilliant fic bloody confusing whoa))