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for I Want to Touch You

by Fedallah

person Linda
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow....this story changed so much. I love it. Fred and George are going though alot and no one sees to understand them. They don\'t eve know whats going on half the time. Sorry about the ff.net incident. that person who reported yas aas a slacker bitch. Update soon...I NEED MORE! :)
person mazda
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I completely loved your fred/george fanfic...i love the tension that was built up...please put up a new chapter, i can\'t wait to see what\'ll happen with their relationship and other outside forces...thank you for writing this--mazda
person Marble
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... i cant describe how amazing this fanfic is. Your writing is wonderful, somehow you can write in such pain and confusion and angst that tears well up in my eyes, yet in a second you throw in a line that has me laughing and crying at the same time. The controversy and conflict give me a headache... i love it. Your writing style is fasinating and real, i couldnt have asked for a better story. Please continue writing, i am anxious to see what happens in the next chapter.
person SilverScaleSerpent
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your fic! More soon?
person Lou
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was the most amzing thing I have ever read. I really hope it isn\'t over. Its powerful, and scary, but delicious at the same time. Your an incredible author. Keep i t up.
person cait
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, really good story, really fucked too, but that\'s the kind of stuff I like and I have a raging lust for those two!
person Emely Raines (who still can\'t remember where her account on this site is located.... grrrr)
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok...... have read bits and peices in my cut and pasting to a wordpad doc. I\'ll put an actual review on once I\'ve read through it.... time constraints don\'t let me read it on this particular computer.... stupid dial up.... Anyway... (and boy do I use plenty \"....\"\'s) What I have read looks great. Well, I should go.... you know.... read this on my own comp. I\'ll review again later.... prob. tomorrow, knowing my reading habits anyways.... bye.
person Holder_of_Happiness
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a great fic! Hope there will be a next chapter and if ther\'s one it\'s comming soon!!!!!!
keep up that good work!
The H_o_H
person Tae-Yeon
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, good story. I\'d like to read more. please update soon
person frozenkiss
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH, I LOVE this story! I mean, its not just random incest, it\'s incest with conseqence, which is real. Like with guilt, and its more then just sex, its a story! Ah, I love it :D

Thank you for writing a real story. Not a lovey dovey fake tale. :D