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for I Want to Touch You

by Fedallah

person icegoddess
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it! keep up the good work
i love twinz
person ender
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic!!!!!! I am so glad that they are finally back together. Oh yeah baby!! I love this alteration idea so that they will be able to act as a couple in public, it is so sweet. Great chapter and cannot wait until the next one!
person balalaika
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a GREAT story, I realy can\'t wait for the next chapter.
I love Fred and George and this is one of the best stories i\'ve read so far.
person Phoenix Dreams
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHY?!

WHY END IT THERE?!
Hurry up with the next Chapter!! This is getting fucking awesome!!!!
person i wish i had one
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!! please, please...continue ^_^
person Sarah
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! I usually don\'t read Harry Potter stuff (I\'m more into Inuyasha at the moment.) but I came here on an impulse and I am glad that I did. This story is SO great. So full of emotion, so angsty, it\'s the BEST that I\'ve read in a long, LONG time. Keep it up! You\'re so good.
person SqueakyClean
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you updated your story! I\'ve been addicted to it since a couple of weeks ago, when I first came across it. The way you portray Fred and George\'s feelings towards each other and the world around them makes it seem so real, and your story is one of the reasons why I love twincest so much now. Very envious of your talent!
~SqueakyClean
person Nova
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I usually avoid overly angsty fics like this one, but... This is a good fic:) This is so weird, but I still like it:) I want to know it ends!:)
person Anonymous
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was amazing. Keep up the awesome work.
person Starry Veil
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI! Remember me from ff.net?revireviewed your story! :)

Man, it was SO LUCKY that I decided out of randomness just to visit adultfanfiction.net for once, \'cause I don\'t usually read the fanfics here. If I hadn\'t come here, I wouldn\'t have found your story, and I wouldn\'t have known that you\'d gotten kicked offa ff.net (they have too many restriction issues!). I\'d just be thinking that you were taking a really long time to update the story. But I was really mad when I found that you\'d gotten kicked off! Argh. Your story was in my Favorite Stories list, too. Yet, like I said, it was a good thing that I found your story on here. The reason I never visit here a lot is because there aren\'t as many fanfics on here as there are on ff.net. Maybe that\'s why you don\'t get too many reviews: some people don\'t even know about this site, which I find weird because at least on this one you can write anything! Did you say in fic fictionpress profile that your story\'s on here now? I haven\'t been on fictionpress in a while, either, so I wouldn\'t know (nice story, by the way, the one with Karen and Sierra and the gang. Sorry that I haven\'t reviewed that).

Anyway, wow. Since chapter 8 (where you old readers from ff.net had left off at), a lot of things sure have changed...things got a lot darker. Though most incestuous stories are. Not like I care...brother incest doesn\'t bother me at all---in fact, I enjoy reading it, which is scary for a lot of people to hear since most aren\'t openminded---which is why Fred/George is one of my favorite pairings. Poor Fred and George; they\'re so confused. I\'m glad that, with reading chapter 11, we can see that at least their bond hasn\'t diminished, since George is holding Fred. Please continue soon!!! And sorry I left such a long review; that\'s how I get when reviewing stories that I love.