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for I Want to Touch You

by Fedallah

person Emely Raines who hates her mom\'s computer with a passion
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry about not reviewing earlier... my mom\'s comp got a virus and went all wonky... then AFF went wonky and there was just a whole bunch of wonliness all around and I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok... sorry \'bout that. It\'s a great story.... it doesn\'t seem to follow the normal format that these stories started taking. It\'s great and the people react the way I would normally associate people acting... It\'s great.. oh wait, I already said that. Keep it up.
person kita
schedule August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. The tension is delicious. *evil grin* Update soon!!
person brigid
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am having a very, very good time reading this. I wasn\'t quite prepared for the sheer amount of angst, but I suppose I just don\'t have enough imagination. I am not complaining, however. Furthermore, this pairing is my personal favorite (I know, I know, I plan to seek professional help...eventually) and I appreciate you handling it with such kindness. I enjoy your writing and eagerly anticipate the next installment. Thanks so much - Brigid (okay, so its really mary brigid bu\'s \'s so close to \"Mary Sue\" that it\'s a difficult name to admit to in the fan world. ah, well)
person Sade Kline
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really great! Most Fred/Gearge stuff is either pure smut or poorly written. It\'s very rare to find great works like this! (Go plots!) I really like how you write this. It\'s absolutely wonderful. I hope you continue this quickly!
person frk_werewolf
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, i\'ve ot to say this is a fascinating story. i\'m a little confused on parts, but i like it none the less.
person Starry Veil
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello again! (Sick of me by now?)

Oh, I\'m so glad the twins are feeling comfortable with each other again! Things are back to normal...except for their relationship (which we all don\'t want to go back to being just regular brothers!!!) and George\'s appearance. What are you gonna have happen? Huh? Huh? Huh? Tell me your plans!!!

Actually, don\'t tell me your plans. I like surprises! Now, just be sure not to make us wait because we all love the story and want to read more!
person SunnyWench
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so great! I love it, and I\'m hooked. Please keep writing!
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
Well, I was just going to leave my review at that...but then I would have sounded really dumb, which I\'m probably going to anyway. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!! I wonder what Fred and George will do for their projects... will we find out????
person Saiai
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is beyond words so I\'m just going to have to dish you out some nonworthy stuff such as: Awesome! Wonderful! Perfect and sad at the same time.
person marble
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! another chapter... thank gods for a little calm after all that angst. i felt relaxed when i read this chapter. I love the new plot ideas. and i also laugh every time i hear the word come. hee hee come. great story!