AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for I Want to Touch You

by Fedallah

person Dassani
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Dude! I couldn't help but review when you mentioned Herman Hesse in the second chapter! The dude is such a great writer and so are you so far! ^.~* Now here I go reading the rest! Wootness!!
Hugs&Serpents'Kisses ~Dassy
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes finally chapter 13!!! i love it. [i am daweasleytwinz_luckycharm from ff.net if you remember me] but anyways...good job keep writing
person Phoenix Dreams
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY FINALLY!!!!!! *has been waiting forever*

Anyway, AWESOME CHAPTER!!!! YAYAYAYA...AHhahahahah pink flamingo xDDDDDD!!! Oh my I'm twice as happy now!!! ^_______^ *glompeths you* Bah! Hurry with the neext update wontcha?????????

^___^

~Phoenix
person meee
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it to death! keep it gonn pleease >333
person Marble
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you for updating!! Sorry you have so much work right now, but thankyou, thankyou, thankyou for writing!!! Once again I will declare that your writing is so honest and forthright. I love where you've put them, everything you have said has not only been good as a story, but has also made me think. You are absolutely brilliant and even though it may take some time I will be waiting paitiently for the next chapter. THANK YOU!!! (you rule all).
person Lain Iwakura
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nicely done! ^^. I have to admit, this is the first story I've come upon with this particular pairing, but it's very well done! I hope you continue to update regularly. I'd also like to say that I'm sooo glad you didn't have any spelling/grammar mistakes that I noticed. That's a big relief to me ^^. Please update soon, I'll be looking!


~Lain of the Azure Sky~
person Lain Iwakura
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nicely done! ^^. I have to admit, this is the first story I've come upon with this particular pairing, but it's very well done! I hope you continue to update regularly. I'd also like to say that I'm sooo glad youn't n't have any spelling/grammar mistakes that I noticed. That's a big relief to me ^^. Please update soon, I'll be looking!


~Lain of the Azure Sky~
person Marble
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You havent updated in forever!!! Please update!! I love this story so much!!
person samurai shoes
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what i want more. Notice people only write reviews when they actually like the story
person Marble
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you dont write more i am going to die. You are one of the best writers in the world... you bring controversial ideas out of hiding and make everyone who reads your work face them. The beliefs and ideals you have brought up in this story are so confusing and that is why they must be spoken of so frankely. This is the most believable twincest I have ever read and i hope you continue. Thank you for writing what you have.
-Marble