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for I Want to Touch You

by Fedallah

person Kosh
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent piece of work. I did not leave a review for each chapter though, but brilliant. Keep it coming!!!!!!
person Eliztric
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fedallah -

There is one word for this fic you have written, and that word is beautiful. You have managed to write something that touched me very deeply in a way that many other things have not. I thank you for this, and only hope that you understand the gravity of what I mean to say, but cannot put into words intelligibly. Something tells me you will know.

In Admiration,

Eliztric
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. The characterization was phenomenal and I thought that the dialogue was amazing. I actually liked the character you created. It would have been fun if she taught Sex Ed. The story seemed like a realistic and slightly twisted fairytale, particularly at the end. I have a slight fetish with fairytales. I thought insinuations during Fred\'s and George\'s discussion was abstrusely hilarious and cute.
The story was not overbearingly dramatic considering the subject(s) that were addressed. It seems slightly odd that the other characters would be so oblivious to their relationship. Perhaps it\'s denial...heh...
It\'s a very good story with good characterization and sequences. Somehow, it manages to remain unique among the many stories that have the same themes. You\'re very talented, I hope you write more stories in the future!

person Herme23
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is absolutely awesome! Fred and George have always been my fave characters in Harry Potter and this is the best story I\'ve ever read about them! Please continue! And hell yeah, isn\'t college great? Except that it gets in the way of my story writing! Have fun and keep writing! Yours, Herme
person War-chan
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Oh My Gods!!! I love F/G fics! There are very and I do mean VERY little stroys \'bout them!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Ja ne
BigFan(of F/G, and now you o\'crose!)
Miss War-chan ^___^
person GothVamp (too lazy to log in)
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Mother Of God! This is amazing. I\'ve been looking for a twincest story that wasn\'t all \'we\'re totally ok with our feelings and everyone will except us eventually\'. THis is realistic and beautifully angsty. Keep it up
person Puppy2002
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. Write more.
person Shinimegami
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! *squees!* I think it\'s the best Fred/George story I\'ve read yet (and I\'ve read a good few...they are my favourite couple to read about. ^_^). I notice that you\'ve not updated in a while...*eyes you* Come on, woman! ~.^ I want more Fred and George....Fread and George in a gay club, no less. <33333 Love your story, and can\'t wait for an update.

Oh, and, yes...damn the censors to hell. ^-^
person Tate
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your fic. is awesome. I got so hooked that I read it all in one sitting. I can
person toshi--
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is a seriously sexy piece of work. ^_^ im depressed i didn't find it earler, dude!! w00t! twincest is hot. and i just figured out that Professor Lamron's name is "normal" backwards!! LOL..im a bit slow..o_0; heh. anyways, love the fic, love the pairing-love you! <33 you're an excellent writer. and you're right, there are some shitty-ass fics on here that people review like mad-its crazy!! like they can't even recognize good writing when they see it. but i want you to know you rule.
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