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for I Want to Touch You

by Fedallah

schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please please please write more :) I love how this could actually happen, like, the situations and peoples reactions. You are a talented writer <3
person Sagerune
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I regret not reviewing previous chapters But this is amazing and 1 of the most realistic Weasley Twincest I've ever read.
If you still look at this fanfic and read this. I hope you do.
You describe Fred and George's feeling, confusion, non clarity amazingly in a fast pace and angst overtone that makes them come alive.

You know if you want this to get feed back and appropriate appreciation you should post it some where else...
Most ppl come on here for porn/lime/smut plain and simple and this goes way too hard/realistic for most people. Cause you're actually building base.

Frankly you dont just describe the sex you describe the morning after with a world thats not very... accepting. A world thats too closely related to ours anyway.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I love how you start it out with George feeling a little weird and then all the things in between. I started to cry though when George was collasped. This really is a lovely story. I'm surprised you didn't get too many reviews. I'm sad that you haven't updated in the longest time though.
person xiola
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i suck at this review thing, but i think, since you deserve it i have to tell you it's one if not the best Fred and George fic i've read so far. :D for my personal tastes it's a touch melodrama-ey in the middle but i suppose that's neccessary for plot movement - otherwise you've made me feel like the characters are still in-character while i'm reading it, while still having enough boy-touching along with the UST to keep me satisfied XD

um. so yeah. i defenitely like it, and would gladly have more if you're still writing it. :D
person SuperHyperCrazyPerson(too lazy to login)
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It awakened some dormant thrill inside me for twincest. I love the way you've incorporated angst with love and tenderness, and blood. I love the way you've described the twins' interactions. I think this is the best George/Fred story I've ever read!
person Incothe
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is amazing since I usually don\'t review I know I\'m horrible. I\'m just starting to read this story and I\'m excited I hope its good well I\'ll review again later...
person Wolfiekins
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an intense story! You have uncovered things about the Twins that I had never even imgined! Amazing! Looking forward to more when you find the time. Very well done!
person Levi
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. xD WRITE MORE MORTAL. :D ONE OF THE FIRST REALLY GOOD FRED AND GEORGE STORIES I HAVE SEEEN.
person Genevieve
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, even though I don\'t often review--hell, I never do--I thought I\'d be nice--plus your fanfic is wonderfully unorthodox--and give you a pleasent review^^. Even though it\'s taboo, twincest is strangely exciting, as is all forms of yaoi, but twincest especially; there is just something terribly sexy about two people who are so alike, who share such a mental and phyical bond, loving each other, more than society says they should. Hope you\'re having as much fun as possibly at college, and I have to admit I know where you\'re coming from, confused about your sexually and such. I just discovered that I am bisexual--although I haven\'t really done anything with other women yet, I feel the pull of attraction often--and have yet to reveil this deep secret to my friends and family and probably will not have the courage too for some time, unfortunately. Well, anyway, keep up the good work, and though I know you\'re pressed, try to write as much as you can and I\'ll keep reading it^^. Well, talk to you later, Geni.
person Sabina Jordan
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I, though how I\'ve looked, have not found many George/Fred stories on AFF.

This was...amazing. Honestly. One of the best things I\'ve ever read. I shall be reccommending it to everyone (I rec. a lot of stuff to people).

Please post more stories! I would absolutely love it.

So, I thank you for writing this :)