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for Of Ties and Torture

by inanutshell

person evelyn
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please keep going. Sounds like it\'s going to be fun! *Wink*
person Dizzywitch
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I am a huge fan of both of the twins and although a bit of one sided twincest is fun i dont like to see fred man handled this way could you make him reluctant at first and then have him start to enjoy himself. I think that if you left it this way then it would be the end for the twins and George would hate himself (unless that was what you were going for?). Liking it so far but hope that things work out well.

Dizzywitch XXXX
person ender
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh please please please, pretty please with cherries (if you like them)on top, continue!!!! i love this pairing, G/F rocks, and i am also enjoying this one sided deal going on, fun fun. I liked the first chapter a lot even though it was a little short, AND!!!!! cut out on the good part OUCH!! good brakes! i would really like this fic to go on. thanks for your time and fiction :)