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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was good
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: Oh, well done! I felt like I was reading canon JKR. Everything was so entirely believable. All the characters spoke so realistically I forgot I was in a fanfiction.
I liked how you set up the pairing and how it wasn't forced or done without any good reasons. You have a wonderfully sure touch for depicting the loving feelings between your two characters and how those feelings arrived. And the smut was perfect. Great job!
I liked how you set up the pairing and how it wasn't forced or done without any good reasons. You have a wonderfully sure touch for depicting the loving feelings between your two characters and how those feelings arrived. And the smut was perfect. Great job!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. Its always good reading warm fuzzys now and then. Although...Some sad sadistic part of me want to see them break up to prove harry was wrong in believing staying together forever. Mean I know but...It COULD happen?
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story. i wish it was longer but that\'s cause i like chapter stories now. never used to like them before but now i love them and if you have one i would love to read it...if it\'s something i love reading. N-E ways. i have to go i have a cat that really wants attention.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story ~ the feelings were so raw and open that it made my breath catch! I loved how you were able to draw the reader in, capture the feelings and wrap it up without drawing out the story to a million or so chapters. Very nicely written.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, I love it, bye
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwweee, so sweet! Loved it!
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It\'s so sweet. Is this going to be it, or will you have more chappies, or maybe a sequel? I think a sequel would be awesome! Like, after Harry kills Voldie or something along those lines. I think it\'d be cute.
Anyways, awesome story and keep up the great work!
~Ducky~
Anyways, awesome story and keep up the great work!
~Ducky~
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reading and reviewing, even if you left a flame. These are my opinions. I\'m not asking that they be yours
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reading and reviewing, even if you left a flame. These are my opinions. I\'m not asking that they be yours