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Wooo hooo! I have so missed this fic!!! This Chapter was absolutely exciting!!! I loved that Hermione bested Lupin! That was just such an amazing scene! Severus has begun to realize that Hermione in her wolf form is different. I can\'t wait until they realize that she\'s fully in charge of herself in this form!! More!!!

I HOPR SNAPE , DUMBELDOR , LUPIN , FEEL LIKE ASSHOLES WHEN THEY FIND OUT SHE WAS NOT PLANING TO COMIT SUICID AND I HOPE THERE IS SOME SERIOUS ASSKICKIN FOR DRACO AND GOONS BUT WHAT THE HELL IS SNAPES DEAL HOULHOULD HAVE ASKED INSTED OF ASSUME OF ARE GIRL LET THIS BE A HAPPY ENDING IF NOT IT WILL SUCK ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love the story, I followed it to here from fanfiction... the only thing im not understanding is, professor mcgonagal, shouldn\'t she be able to sense hermione... especially while she\'s in her cat form?

I agree with Anon with the exception of point number 5. Yes, it\'s unprofessional, I admit that, but as far as I know you\'re not going for any awards, so I think it\'s completely permissible. It\'s actually entertaining when the reader is thinking the exact same thing and then they see the parenthesied comment and get a chuckle out of it. I\'ve been tempted to do thee the thing in my stories, because my characters are so stupid and i get sick of keeping them in character somtimes...it would just be better if i put comments there.

but i digress. I also agree with Anon that this story is worth putting thoritiriticisms out there. This story is unique, and even though you have an immature style of writing, believe me when I say I\'d rather read it that way, than not at all. I love your ideas and how they come together. Great work.

Em.

Two updates in two days!! Hurray! Please keep themingming...

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AAK! What will happen when Remus changes early? I hope he takes the wolfbane because Hermione will feel SO guilty if something bad happens and I want her to be as empowered as possible, in spite of her missing spark due to Severus\' bumblings! I just wish her aim with Draco could have been a little better... more than just his shoes!
Tawny, I hope you\'ll keep writing -- and hope the commissions won\'t get in the way... (I\'m quite selfish with this, but, hey, I want to see what happens!)

Take care and may the goddess of creative inspiration continue to smile on you,
Amaryluna

This is a really good story!But I was kinda hoping that Draco would rape her or somethin!(laughs evilly) lol!I was hoping aswell(I do alot of hoping huh?)That her and Lupin would do a lil sumthin! lol anyway its a good story overall.

I\'m glad you updated your story. I hope Draco gets what

I love this story. I really like the cat DNA bit. (can i borrow it for a story)

Emerald SaDiablo

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Update soon.

Great story! I read the whole thing (so far) in one sitting -- can\'t wait to read more! I like the combination of cat nature and wolf nature that Hermione\'s experiencing... the paradoxes and the way they compensate for each other! Please keep updating, quickly!!
Thanks!
Amaryluna

I really like your story, it\'s definetly one of the most unique I\'ve seen so far. Ie yoe you keep writing to let all us anxious peoknowknow what is going to happen with Hermione.