rate_review Reviews

Hey love your story keep up the good work its great.

FOUL CALLED! Unnecessary author's note! LOL! Really, you didn't need that question right in the middle of the story. And just for your information they have the cast to the elbow to prevent movement of the wrist. And as all the muscles in the upper arm are in some way connented to the wrist it's just wiser to do it that way. Good luck and keep writing!

You really like those author's notes don't you? Sorry to say that they do nothing for your story other than to distract your reader with petty details that we were better off not knowing. Example, writing to us to let us know that you just couldn't write the word "panties". Well, I hate to be the one to point this out to you, but you just did. Trust me when I say that if it's not important enough to write at either the beginning or the end of the chapter, then it's not worth writing at all.

I'm up to ch. 23 I love it, it's wonderful, can you let me know when the next chapter is up? Thank you!

This is a very original story, which in fan fiction, is very admirable. Your work is quite good, despite immature wording. In fact, the only thing I have a real issue with is the fact that in one of your opening comments (chapter 15 or 16) you stated that wolves are not canines. In fact they are - the scientific name of any species of wolf beings with "Canis", and wolves are categorized as canines, along with dogs. In fact, as scientific classification goes along, the dog and wolf have the same kingdom, phylum, class, order, family and genus. They differ only in species. Thef isf is categorized as the species "lupis", while the dog is categorized as the species "domesticus". I swear this to you. I am very much a Biology nerd and it's not something for me to lie about.

Yes, it was very worth while. This is an excellent story. Thanks

I love this fic! Very nicely written, I am jealous. What language is cirrico from, or did you make it up?

Oh this is sooooooooo good. Can I please get an email notication when you update? Thanks

WOW Go Hermione!!!! Thas sas so cool! \"Holy Shit\" *hee hee hee* I hope she kicks Malfoy\'s a**!!!
I loved this. More please

This is great! I LOVED the whole interaction between the regular wolf pack, Hermione, and Remus! Sirius\' last cooment was kinda funny....how is this scene going to affect the rest of the fic? Is Hermoine\'s superiorty over Remus only for in their wolf form wil will he heed her in human form as well? *snorts* I\'ve got the picture of him scooting on his belly in human form towards her stuck in my head! PLEASE update SOON...and when you do will you PLEASE email me to let me know? *makes big puppy-eyes* PWEASE!?!