AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Humility and Obedience

by Byline

person laceyweasley
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Very sexy. Can\'t wait.
person DawnEB
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I agree - big, bad but passionate old Snapey, with just the odd chink in the facade to get a finger hold in. You write him that way, and so well! I can see Hermione falling for it too. Always having to be in control of herself and the sensible voice when others steer a dangerous course, finally giving in to a \'safe\' but scary situation.

Will they find find any kind of relationship beyond sex? I eagerly await the next chapter.
person Cathy N
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story so far. Please Please write more. I am dying to know what else Snape has planned for Hermione.
I think I had better go and take a cold shower now. ;-)

Cathy N
person Talene
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it!!!!! *PLEASE* write more!! I love the whole thing and I just know that things can be worked out!
person Rachel
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Somehow, I always think that is is more Snape\'s style, rather than the lovesick puppy afraid of his feelings. Looking foward to the next chapter :-)
person Stietoe
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know, you really should post a continuation to this story... it\'s just too good to leave it like that... so please do post a next chapter??????
person Stietoe
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my, i\'m searching for words to describe this feeling i got after i read this...
it\'s just brilliant, and i sincerely hope there will be more where that came from... lots and lots more
person Persia
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh!!!!!!!!!!! I\'d love for Sexy Sevy to do that to me! Where do I sign up? Great fic, can\'t wait for more!
person Velvetina
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing, please please update quickly.
person CS
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What powerful emos ths this evokes. I think you\'ve captured both characters quite well.

I like how you build the tale. Hermione\'s nervoss ass and then \'bravery\' and slow then fast acceptance and the giving of herself to the fantasy... that is broken by an ill-timed word from a man who has always humiliated and seemingly despised her. I like that Severus seems to leave his animosity behind as he enjoys the situation, as a man who enjoys the control over a woman who is learning to enjoy not having it. And I wonder what will happen now he knows what he\'s potentially lost... and look forward to seeing how he - no, they - gt bat back. Get past the barriers of who they\'ve been to each other and what was said, and become all they could be to each other.

I look forward to the next installment.